Please click the link to take a look at the sample of my first short screenplay. Just a Good Luck Charm (5 page sample) Let me know what you think, I would be greatly thankful.
Thank you!
A Place for Great Cinema
Please click the link to take a look at the sample of my first short screenplay. Just a Good Luck Charm (5 page sample) Let me know what you think, I would be greatly thankful.
Thank you!
A World of Film 
It reads well Darrell. Is it set in America? For some reason it ‘sounds’ American in my head.
I am presuming it will develop into more than a ‘frustrated kidnap’ scenario. Is the child at school going to have to be involved? The older couple are obviously intending to keep Tyler out of any financial rewards, so there is room to develop that idea.
I am left wanting to know what happens, so that’s the best compliment I can give!
Best wishes, Pete.
Darrell, as you like to write on other film sites, have you ever thought about being a contributor to curnblog.com ? I am sure that James would welcome your work, and introduce it to a new audience. Just a thought. Pete.
http://curnblog.com/author/pete-johnson/